February 27, 2024 Tuesday

 So, bits and pieces, is the subject perhaps. We’ll see how this ends out. Tomorrow I start another writing class, kind of writing for the future. It made me think of a new title AND THEN ITS GONE. A KIND OF STORY ABOUT LIFE.

A bigger story perhaps too much to write about, perhaps, bits and pieces continues to be the best title so far. I will continue to read stories that perhaps will end out being similar. Check the one year deadline. Perhaps I will get a chapter off and on in this blog and put it all together.

I think the first chapters will be, or the first one will be kind of an origins story. Like where those people came from. The Masaba range, was the center for war activity for WWi and then the crash and then the recover for WWII. I didn’t realize this until I started to research photos for equipment used on the Iron Range. Apparently there was dynamite and then digging for the ore, which was then turned into pellets. I remember reading the manuals for taconite production at my grandfather’s house, I’m pretty sure that was after my grandmother died. For some reason I remember the house quite well. It was probably only one of three or four other houses I was ever in as a child. The houses for my grandparents on both sides, the Mailman’s house, and then the house down the street where I looked at home videos and rock collections of this couple in my down, and then Dolores Keller’s house and Ronna Lee Axelrods house. So interesting how isolated we all were 


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