February 21, 2024 Wednesday

 Discuss Haiku moments or delights

Water falling

Filtered Light

Autumn Dusk

Another Birthday

Drifting Leaves 

Distant Voices

Write a phrase to go with this fragments.

Frames and Phrases


Winters icicles

Water falling spreads on ground

Sun’s fire spreads its warmth.


Filtered Light

Blurred edges

Spring Rain


Autumn Dusk

Orange leaves float back and forth

Crunch underfoot


Another Birthday

Candles lit Song sung Presents

Children laught and play


Drifting Leaves

Once caked in gutters

Dried by sun


Distant Voices Hide

City blocks echo 

All secrets out


While attempting to understand writing in general. I explore the words that images create. Each word an image and an aha! Liminal it’s called, and not so easy to create.


A phrase that catches your attention so you want to read more.

Grey Morning Walk

Bird sounds caw drones through

Black feather weaves its way


Black trunks and branches

Snow covered ground

Grass waits



Frozen Winter Stream

Percussive Sounds

Pebbles underneath


Old Stove

Kettle Heats Up

Sound of Water

Developing your practice: Developing a “sit spot” and /or ginkgo walk practice; writing haiku this week from objects and events in your life; watching “Haiku talk” videos #14 & 76.



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